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by Murraycooke82

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
get an editor

Your povs are a mess, and this is the wrong category.

LustyScribeLustyScribeover 4 years ago
Very hot!

Well written and I had no problem visualizing it all. I look forward to seeing more of your writing!

Murraycooke82Murraycooke82over 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you! I did want it to bounce from person to person in a kind of frantic way. I am looking forward to improving and writing more x

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing!

A amazing read! Well done ! 👍🏻👍🏻😍

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