All Comments on 'Detention with Miss DeVille Pt. 03 - Finale'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Time constraints

You don't build up a villain and have them easily defeated by time, between the first strike and the twelve of midnight, Edmund had enough time to slice Aaron's throat. A better ending would have been the death of Aaron with the curse unbroken. Perhaps a miscalculation on Lady Deville's part? Such that Aaron could be adopted and not of the family line. Or he is the bastard offspring of his mother and some other man.

Curlywurly68Curlywurly68over 6 years agoAuthor
Beaten By Passion

I appreciate the alternative ending comment as it is a great suggestion. However I wanted Edmund and Adeline to be beaten by their passion for each other and to spend eternity together.

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