All Comments on 'Detroit City - DGH Ch. 02'

But still no Red Wings games! LOL. Just kidding. Great story!

Let's see ... what shall we do for a theme for the next "invitational" this fall?

Nice effort. Loved the Sam character. She seems like someone I'd like to know.

Regards, Jack

I was expecting something dark but this works for me.

Thanks DG

I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. You are without a doubt a very talented writer, I look forward to reading your next story. BRAVO

Love the stories with characters I'd like to meet! Sam is one that fits. When you do a slice of life it is real. Thanks for another winner!

another first rate love story. i envy your writings. always read your stories...keep them coming if you can.

Thanks for a good read and a great ending. Keep writing what you like.

from start to finish. I great story and as always I wait for more from you. Thanks.

Fine story. I loved it. Far too few written like this anymore. Thanks for the post.

How does one writer write so many great stories? You are without question one of the best writers on this site. I look forward to reading your next submission.

A fan of DG Hear

What? A couple who wait? Wow - what a novel idea, at least at this site! Excellent love story. many thanks

Speaking of songs - I Feel Good & its all your fault Mr. Hear.<P>

He - Perks a body up like some good news from home.<P>

Needless to say - You are appreciated and looked forward 2 & Don't Change a <P>

With Very High Regard

being a part of these invitationals. You've given us another good story, DG. Is it time for our next one yet??

Thanks for the good read, DGH. Your nubile fan. XO's...lol

hi this was a really good story mate it was lovely and very romantic u shuld be proud of urself

I really enjoyed this story. Actually, it was very believable, false rumors, shyness and all.

DGH, I like it that you vary the genres you write in. Thanks again!

Damn after reading enough, I need to scroll up and hit the favourite button! Just though I'd leave a comment, truly brilliant stories. Keep em up :)

You should ask the lady to marry you before you get the ring.

1-she may not say yes

2-do you know her ring size?

3-do you know the style ring that will please her or which styles she doesn't like?

I can't stop reading your stories. I know they where written years ago. Anyways, just wanted to say they brought me memories of my past girlfriends. Their was one actually in particular that reminded me of Sam. We care for eachother but I lost her because I was a idiot, who got jealous over nothing!!!....

P.S. I would appreciate we kept my love life a secret. Lol && if someone ever finds that special someone hold on && don't be to quick to judge everything they bcuz it can cost u!!!

Really nice story!

Another Fantastic story from a very gifted Author! I love romance stories and there is that! Also humor! Love is a many splendid thing. Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

a brilliant story of finding a girl and falling in love.....with a few nice twists on the way.....can't beat a great love story...

It shows when love is found before sex it makes a strong marriage. .

It is euchre! Great story!

I only have one complaint. Why is it that you people from up north seem to think that everyone here in Texas always walk around wearing Cowboy hats, boots, and spurs, not to mention packing Six-Shooters? Plus, the music you mention is older than Methuselah.

Wise up, you watch way too damn many movies.

John

a very good story

Im enjoyed your story very much. Thank you.

...marriage proposal on your knee, and in public. eventually, lots of procreation. not the best english either. gotta be in the us. nonetheless, i read it. story flows well. thanks.

I enjoy your stories. I just wish they where not all based on someone jumping to a conclusions. I line about jumping to conclusion. Then 10 pages on trying to right the wrong.

Your story was a pleasurable read. Thank you

Keep writing, please. Darn good story. Enjoyed it.

Great story! Thank you.

First time I've read this and it is great. Look forward to diving into more of your stories 5*

Five stars isn't even close. Wish I had your talent. Sam finally found the man she loved, even as a buddy and blessed him with children- the ultimate tribute to lasting love. She'll know they've made it when her daughter says, "ma will you and dad watch the baby"? So,so wonderful!

I'd hope that Literotica allowed us to place two rating scales end to end! Excellent story-line. Please give us moire.

BJ

What a great love story, Jeff and Sam fell truly in love with each other before they ever had sex. Storyline was excellent and character development was also excellent. The story in the end couldn't have had a better ending with them having 5 kids and living happily ever after. Well done 5-stars

Great ending love your writing.

You don't propose at some one else's wedding,it is crass and the height of bad manners.

It is crass and the height of bad manners,to propose as someone else's wedding.

Loved it, great story from a great writer⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

5 stars do you think there are any sam's in the world today maybe