All Comments on 'Developing Friends'

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maydecmaydecabout 2 years ago

Loved that it was a combination of exhibitionist/voyeur and mature. Really liked how the relationship flowed from a casual conversation to cam style sex by a couple photographing using digital modern means with an older gentleman using celluloid photography and a Rollie medium format camera, nice contrast which added to the generational gulf and added to the stories multi dimensional interest level.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sincerely hoping that your excellent story develops further

orangecuriousorangecuriousabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you. Maydec. More cameras in future chspters.

Anon, yes, more submitted

AtrampboyAtrampboyalmost 2 years ago

Nicely presented and an interesting foundation for more to hopefully come

cors41214guycors41214guyalmost 2 years ago

Very nice start to what I hope will be a lot of fun, I just love stories about photography and what it leads to.

orangecuriousorangecuriousalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the kind words.

BiggaluteBiggalutealmost 2 years ago

A beautifully written, sexy story. Great characters. Looking forward to reading your other installments.

SuperhanzSuperhanzalmost 2 years ago

Great characters. Really geat pace. Am really enjoying this story

AlfawolfphotosAlfawolfphotosover 1 year ago

Orangecurious, Excellent work. Great series. You are a true storyteller and I look forward to reading more of your works.

orangecuriousorangecuriousover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks, Alpha

khollen2khollen210 months ago

I really enjoyed this story, especially being an older gentleman. Well written and not all about college kids humping anyone who wants it. I like a slow build up and you're done this perfectly. Now I will look to see if there is more, hopefully there is.

orangecuriousorangecurious10 months agoAuthor

hi Khollen2, there are more chapters. hope you like them

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