All Comments on 'Devi'

...but I found it very difficult to follow.

Yes, the author has a better grasp of English than I have of his language. That said, It made little sense to me.

Insightful peep into

the complex mix of emotions

in many modern Indian minds

Nice stuff dude. but cut the pseud stuff and make it lighter next time. hoping to see more.

Besh bhalo golpo. Kintu ekhane sobai eroticism khonje. Golpotay eroticism is suppressed under your thoughts on morality and others. More thought provoking than strictly erotic. Continue writing. You write well.

Following the narration is hard, very hard, loses route, loses charm and pleasure, hard to continue

The author is pompous, grammatically and logically challenged. Avoid the story.. oh, you can't, you already been through it? Tch, tch.

R u writing erotica or entering an essay writing competition.