All Comments on 'Deviance Ch. 02'

Really enjoying this story so far!

I have hopes that this could by a good or even great BDSM story but there’s no sign of it as yet. Signing a contract under duress doesn’t make it valid in any way, not that BDSM contracts have any legal bearing. So unless she decides to submit willingly or opts to renegotiate, then everything that happens until the end of that 90 day period is still very firmly Non Con. It does bring up the possibility of the whole Stockholm Syndrome problem but I’m definitely intrigued to see where this leads.

It’s easy to see who the not so mysterious would be Dom is, I’m curious to see if you’ve written a chapter about her reporting to the police.

From a literary standpoint the whole thing is very well written.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

I rather like this story. I hope it continues and is a decent read.