All Comments on 'Devious Chinese Matchmaking'

EXCELLENT!

Lovely story. 5 stars and a favorite

Wonderful sweet story! Thanks for taking the time to come up with this unique romance. Only question - does Clint get his bonus?

Good, original, well-thought story. It's probably a good idea to continue the story to an ultimate completion. "More, please."

Nice story.

Pkwase chuck the fsr overused three dots and include descriptive text to pull together what they separated.

when you are successful...I might...just might...give you that

Could become

when you are successful," and with a frown added, "I might," with a slight thoughtful pause and cheeky grin she continued, "just might," then giving him a big smile she completed her speech, "give you that