All Comments on 'Dhanno and Kammo'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very good story...

.. and in general all stories are very erotic. It's hard to explain why, but I found your stories excellent. I cannot understand why nobody commented yet...

A suggestion: (my fantesy) the two maids will dominate the young dude...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
please put active dialogue

Dear Writer,

Your story plot is great and all but there is no active dialogue interchange....which dampens the mood....

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