by Mostera1
thank goodness there is a chapter 7 coming!! will be sad when their tale ends. is a damn fine read.
...isn't that what Literotica is for?
I enjoy the gentleness and respect the characters have had for each other all the way through. You created a situation where they both had been wounded in life, and found safe havens in one another. They could be themselves, but recognized and complemented each other's true worth . Realistic or not, I get a kick out of it and look forward to the next chapter.
amazing story. Thank you. It's good to read a real love story instead of all that crap that is posted on this site.
most enjoyable and very well written look forward to the next chapter with mixed emotions want to read it but hate to see the story end
I'll be sorry when this story ends. Its a wonderful read, and well written.
Thank you for your beautiful love story with a twist. This elegantly describes the fears and hopes of two delightful characters. It gives the reader a different perspective from which to view an age old love story. You have treated the sexuality of both characters with sensitivity and grace, enobling the gradual development of their love.
Different and very beautiful love story. Yes, this story open my heart. Well done.
Nothing seriously drastic ( 'The home would become a house again,' )I do believe its only A house until you make it A home
I think the proper way to say it would be :::the house would become A home again
There were quite A few of these bitty mistakes in this chapter
Ooops
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the House had been a home
" while they were both in it "
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Sam is thinking about Lynn moving out
& the Home they have shared ..reverting to being only a "house" with just her in it
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Ooops
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