All Comments on 'Diamonds In The Rough Ch. 06'

by Mostera1

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mokkelkemokkelkeabout 12 years ago

thank goodness there is a chapter 7 coming!! will be sad when their tale ends. is a damn fine read.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeabout 12 years ago
I know it's far fetched, but...

...isn't that what Literotica is for?

I enjoy the gentleness and respect the characters have had for each other all the way through. You created a situation where they both had been wounded in life, and found safe havens in one another. They could be themselves, but recognized and complemented each other's true worth . Realistic or not, I get a kick out of it and look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
absolutely great

amazing story. Thank you. It's good to read a real love story instead of all that crap that is posted on this site.

donaldedonaldeabout 12 years ago
very interesting tale

most enjoyable and very well written look forward to the next chapter with mixed emotions want to read it but hate to see the story end

kalamazoo707kalamazoo707about 12 years ago
Thank you!

Thank you for sharing this story! I totally enjoyed it!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
MADE OR BORN....EMBRYO TO MATURE

WHAT OR WHO OR WHY DECIDES. TK U MLJ LV NV

ambush184ambush184about 12 years ago
really enjoying this

I'll be sorry when this story ends. Its a wonderful read, and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Sam & Lynn

I cannot wait to read more! Please hurry!

peterg55peterg55about 12 years ago
A Beautiful Love story

Thank you for your beautiful love story with a twist. This elegantly describes the fears and hopes of two delightful characters. It gives the reader a different perspective from which to view an age old love story. You have treated the sexuality of both characters with sensitivity and grace, enobling the gradual development of their love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Lovely

Different and very beautiful love story. Yes, this story open my heart. Well done.

nazari2964nazari2964about 12 years ago

Romance through and through.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I noticed A few little mess ups in this chapter,,

Nothing seriously drastic ( 'The home would become a house again,' )I do believe its only A house until you make it A home

I think the proper way to say it would be :::the house would become A home again

There were quite A few of these bitty mistakes in this chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LOL

Ooops

......

the House had been a home

" while they were both in it "

.

Sam is thinking about Lynn moving out

& the Home they have shared ..reverting to being only a "house" with just her in it

....

Ooops

.

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