All Comments on 'Diane & John Ch. 01'

I found myself smiling in anticipation as I moved from page to page. You have a wonderful writing style. Very talented MathGirl. Very, very talented. I love how you wrote in both their views. ^.^ I cannot WAIT to read the following stories of Diane and John. You can tell there was much thought put into this, and it's nice to read a story where that is present. Hahaha.

It was so intriguing the way you integrated both the female and male viewpoints into your story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Your story about Diane's first orgasm was way off the chart. I'd give it a 10, if I could. From the detail in your story, I could "see" the fire in the fireplace, Diane's puffy nipples, and her sexy pussy. Oh, to be John--how I'd like to have traded places with him. Great story.

Great writing here, I enjoyed it very much.

A sexy, sensitive and delicious story.

Just charming. I'm coming back for more!

Please continue!