All Comments on 'Diane, Lorena, and Me'

Hot believable story, well told.

Excellent believable story as the first commenter said.

I've just one tiny vocabulary quibble: the narrator talks about "coercing" Diane, which means persuading by threats or force, and I'm sure from the rest of the story that it's not what you meant him to say.

Good work, keep it up.

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Thanks for the feedback folks. It's my first story. I plan to do more. Many thanks Anon, you're right of course, coerce was a bad word choice.

Love it