All Comments on 'Dianne's Visit'

A fantastic session of pent-up lust exploding with passion restrained for so many years. Wonderfully told, vividly explained.

A couple of very small catches; perhaps missed byou the Proof Reader/Editor?

"...shower off the grim" if this is a typo, it's a typo; if not a typo, then it is a spelling error.

"...it was even harder to sate it." This sentence doesn't need the second it. 'It' is already identified as relating to her boner.

"She'd press ..." she'd is the contraction of she had. Since the sentence is present tense, it might better as 'She pressed' connotating the act as it happens.

This is good, you have a penchant for porn.

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indeed we need more futa on futa stories

Cumflation and romance. A surprisingly good combination. Thanks for an entertaining story.