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All Comments on 'Diary of a Nightclub Bartender'

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Auden JamesAuden Jamesalmost 10 years ago
Crap

Stupid fuck puppet excuse of a story.

Let the beginning be the end, too, please.

Thanks.

–AJ

CarolinaBoyCarolinaBoyalmost 10 years ago
Way too fast

No pace to it, no build up, and definitely no eroticism. Slow it down and give it some detail, hook us with it and then drag us along until you land us. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

keep going its a damn good start

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