All Comments on 'Diavolo Ch. 08'

One more line pls. You can't leave us on tetherhooks for Abby's reply (and angst). Anyway, waiting is good for the soul (hang in there, Gabe!). Loving the whole story so far but it is quite dragging on some parts (get it on already lol) As always magnificent writing, Levana. Don't edit anything (it's soooo darn yummy already.) Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. ;) Thanks for making my day!

Btw, Gabe is a sly devil by tricking Abby soo many times, first with the live in job, then with lowering her defenses with that no clothes/sex thing lol. l guess we do crazy stuff when we're in love. And Abby! What a closet minx she is turning out to be. I love how her character slowly emerges from the warmth of Gabe's love. Vengence vs Love and l think love is winning (the main reason for vengence is slowly being edged out of the story, even the pretend girlfriend thing. So many things going on, l guess.) I hope it turns well in the end. P.S. Gabe, somehow the song, "You Make the Good Girls Turn Bad" keeps looping in my head lol. You Rock!

Abby is going to need to toughen up if she plans on staying in a relationship with Gabriel. There will be plenty of women that will have the hots for him. And there will be plenty more times when he will spend money on her. If she haven't figured out by now that Gabriel isn't using her then something is wrong with her. Someone need to take care of her since she is always the one running to her family when they call.

So excited for a new chapter! You're killing us here with the almost sex scenes. The only thing I didn't really like was the whole "marry me" line at the end - it just seems a bit too soon, but I guess that's kind of the point! I'm a bit confused with the timeline, I can't remember off hand how long Gabe was in the hospital/how long they have known each other. Now the agonizing wait for chapter 9 begins

Gah, I love this story. About halfway through each chapter, I suddenly realize I am reading with a silly grin on my face. Can't wait to see where it goes! Excellent work!

¡AY DIOS MIO! So damn good! Everything is so damn perfect. The wait is freakin' worth it. I love all this 'delayed gratification' thing. Everything is going fast for them (Gabe and Poptart, lol) and slow for us. :)

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Writing has always been a passion of mine but lately I feel like I don't have much of a life. Last night I was considering just finishing Diavolo and getting the last story of the AA series, Sethaliel, done and just calling it a day for my writing. I spend every weekend at the laptop from morning into the wee hour of the morning the next day and then Monday I go to work. Time is marching on and I feel I'm not getting enough satisfaction out of this as I used to due to just a handful of comments and emails. I guess you can say I'm starting to get a little bored with it and maybe it's time to let it be and just enjoy other things, like traveling and going out to places with my family on the weekends like a normal person. :) Who knows. That's just me thinking here.

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Yes yes yes yes oo mmmmgggggg

I cant wait....

next

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Another great chapter to add to an amazing story. Easily worth 5 stars. Thankyou for sharing.