by Daddysgirlfl
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. You've done yourself proud.
great story your words pull me in saiding have to read next sentence cant stop You are well appreciated.
Superb! The details of the area coupled with the right mix of plot development and sexual tensions make for a well-written story. Certainly looking forward to the developing plot lines. Hope you are as original with the upcoming action as you have been here. Little hints...letting/enjoying others seeing his "lady," yet he's the only one who will be touching her...the requests that are not requests and her ability to discern which are which...all make for good writing.
Just a fantastic storyline and your writing is so professional and keeps me interested from your very first sentence. I am Adam's age but young at heart and ready to have that kind of sexy relationship!
Bravo!!!