by Catmoore
It's fun to hear what both of them were thinking of each other. I have had some of those awkward moments with my own son so it's was exciting to hear both sides of their thoughts. Please continue.
Hi Cat,
I voted 100%, you tell a great story. I found it hard to follow at first but, the more I read the more I enjoyed.
Sincerely,
Richard
This is a wonderfully well written, very stimulating story! I can't wait for more! I'm really enjoying your style of writing!
Well done!
Well written from both perspectives. Plenty of emotional charge. As we say in Maine...keep it up Cat.
Thank you my Lady for bringing a edge,oomph and class to erotic writing. Panting for more - Anon
a brilliant start to this some what very erotic story. can't wait to read more of this fascinating story.love the writing.
Cat this is a beautiful series and flows quite naturally. Each character comes across as genuine and their affair seems so credible. Thanks for sharing this!
As I said in my private comment, Cat, I really like how you did this. You got me aroused and damp. I am sure if you keep this up you will have me wet and panting. And I like wet and panting. Keep going, girl. Make me cum.
Susan
A great start to a series, you have really whetted the appetite - looking forward to the reading the cumin' chapters
Instead of writing how about knitting? Your about that age where you should be making your grandchildren sweaters anyways right.