All Comments on 'Dig Two Graves Ch. 05'

Couldn't stick the landing.....1 star

What a disappointment! There should have been 2 literal graves. One for the traitor slut, and one for the Schmidt she laid down with.

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As for the HR enabler harridan, make her physical appearance match the ugliness of her spirit, and send her out into the world as a warning to others.

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The absolute bare minimum response is long prison sentences for everyone involved! Multiple felonies including assault, sexual assault, false imprisonment, fraud, and conspiracy.

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ZK

No joy. No hope. Not fun. Just anger and pain. 2*

Just a bit long, our MC's wife as portrayed was obviously completely irrational with her jealousy think her husband had cheated on her and that was even compounded by the fact he supposed assaulted his assistant. Irrational thoughts are just that, irrational, no real basis for having them. Obviously she was already screwed up by less than normal parents. We are all products of of our environment and the company we keep feeds our tongues. If you don't believe that just look at the Muslim religion and some others that make no sense to Christians and even non believers. Some of the other religions are completely foreign to others who believe differently. Oh well, live and let live. It seems our whole culture is screwed up anyway. The revenge fuch was a bit over the top, as it was men to be. They both should have been prosecuted but our MC was a bit of wimp along those lines and still had some feeling for his wife. It's not hard to believe that those types of things happen, just look at some of the porn out there on the web. Enough rambling our author has written a well thought out story and deserves some praise for his efforts. Thank you for a pretty good story but I sometimes really like a good BTB ending. Besides what do I know about writing, I'm just a retired mechanic.

good story but she got off so lightly so only a 4

What a total bitch. Her revenge was over the top even if she truly believed the MC had an affair. But to wish him dead and it was her partner in crime who drove him to the hospital and then she co tinued to sleep with Schmidt, well that shows she is a true psycho. No reconciliation. MC was too nice. I would have laughed in her face and told her surely she was joking. With her? Lol nope. She went to defcon 1 and nuked her marriage from orbit. But the callous feelings about her husband being in the hospital and staying with Schmidt after the despicable "revenge" acts shows she has deep rooted psychological problems. Really deep. She is damaged goods.

4 Stars on a story that could have been really good . Some guys like that POS deserves to see how well he can swim in the ocean

Great story! Shame the author hasn’t written anything else

She did get off to easily. At least charge for assault.

It was entertaining to read and held a reader's attention..that makes it a successful tale...earned.. 5 ..stars JZK

She got off too easily at the end after all the build up, he turned wimp

Ended in a whimper

I liked it very much and am pleased with the ending.

Billy Lines

Anon-Re- Janine flashing her pussy- I knew a Janine at work. Was a pretty big hoe. Would have flashed her pussy, at the JR high students on a field trip. Might be a coincidence?

You ever hear the phrase” quit while you are ahead?” The first four chapters were , for the most part, pretty riveting. I gave them a 5, even though I thought he should have pressed criminal charges against Schmidt, and his wife. And the 6 million settlement? Let’s say his lawyer, and the other players got a Million. That leaves him with 5. Let’s say with his promotion, he would have made $300,000 a year. If you factor in raises and bonuses, that’s about 10 years salary. And he lost one of his testicles, and possibly would never be able to have a normal sex life. The last chapter seemed like a cheap attempt, to paint the wife as “ damaged by life” , so the fact she walked away scot free, wouldn’t look so weak. Adolph Hitler had a tough life growing up. He was beaten by his father, wounded twice in action, and actually lost his eyesight temporarily in a gas attack. I don’t believe that excused him, from the death of millions of Jews. And the wife in this story, should have gotten everything she deserved. Nice start, but the ending ruined it....

I cannot see anyone reading such a document and making 1+1 =2. Just the fact of page 1 vs page 2 would give reason to doubt and then laugh.

It's far too hard to reconcile the character of someone that is capable of being an ADA with someone that is so mentally unhinged and seemingly incapable of using the very skills she's honed everyday in her career when it comes to her home life. She seemed more like supermarket middle management material than someone with a keen analytical mind capable of sifting the shit from the real.

I guess it's a real problem for writers when they try to portray someone who is clearly that much more intelligent than they are. Maybe next time have them as a car saleswoman etc.

Also the trickle truthing of the PI's was all a bit much, yes it created a little bit of tension, but much frustration too. We the reader didn't need to be led through like a donkey.

Too many inconsistencies in the characters personalities.

The woman physically emasculated you, no, literally castrated you. Reconciling? Not plausible. There was no logic or convincing emotion explanation for choosing reconciliation. Neither seemed invested in their marriage before this sharade. Why the sudden emotions of love? And after what she did? Not convincing.

In the end, he was willing to explore a future friendship with her and open to her suggestion. Where was this passivness and forgiveness before the whole debacle. They were toe to toe in their previous verbal assault matches.

The wife was an ADA. She could've chosen a less destructive revenge. Why would she do something this blatenely criminal. They were other ways for somone of her status and power to go about this.

That was stupid.

Also, the wife is psychotic in the clinical sense. This unnatural response would've been predicated by other unwarranted actions. No mentions of this.

Was ok until you put janine flashing her pussy in it. That was stupid and unnecessary.

It’s a shame that this is the only story Winterfox posted here, I would have enjoyed some other work from him. Thanks KS

The sort of story you can't put down until the end. I wonder if she thought of apologising to Bill?

After reading this story, I get a lot of the anger Susie had. I can totally see the marriage having already been troubled as making partner would certainly be time consuming. Plus, Jake forgot his anniversary until his plane landed.

That being said, wow. Obviously, that revenge was over the top and I couldn’t see a marriage just surviving THAT.

But Schmidt’s motivations were probably the dumbest of all. He went to great lengths for five nights over sex and then to pimp her out? That’s just insane. Given the severance package (originally $2MM if $5MM was 250% increase), Schmidt basically paid $400K per night in lost wages just to fuck Susie.

Heu, j'ai déjà lu des conneries mais celle là les dépasse toutes.

Superlative story brought to an expected close. As another reviewer mentioned this would make a good movie.

When she asked if they could be friends. I think the correct answer would have been, would you have forgiven me if the situation was reversed. Like if I would have twisted your nipple half off in some sick revenge scenario. You really need to get help. FYI, I think I would be in jail if that was the case, how come your not Ms ada

For get Susie after what she did to you not even counting what she did to your balls. Go after your old secretary Heidi, she’s 100 times more loyal then your wife ever was..

5 stars until this ending. Maybe an epilogue would help but I doubt it.

Yeah she doesn't deserve forgiveness and she admitted that she kinda knew he was full of shit and was getting off on being a skank. So now might be the time to drop those criminal charges on her, make sure she can't practice law anymore, she made the MC lose a friggin testicle.

boo hoo hoo

1 star - this type of story has been done before with just about the same conclusions.

The SLUT was either CRAZY, OR a few bricks short of a full load, OR one wheel dragging in the sand - no other reason necessary.

I've met two women just like Susie and I thank God every day I never courted either - they were gorgeous, smart and clinically insane. The story mechanics are good, lots of drama. Susie has blinders the size of barn doors, but some people ARE like that. Too bad you've never posted any more stories. This one is excellent.

Excellent story 5*

Pretty good series but wished there was another page to wrap it up

If there is anything you want to know, now is the time to ask.

No, I know all that I need, or care to know.

So it’s all in the paperwork?

Overwhelmingly, but with one exception…I understand you now love the taste of semen.

After all that has happened, I suppose that I deserve the cruelty.

No cruelty intended, just a crumb for you to give serious thought, before your next appointment with my counselor.

winterfoxx hears a suggestion .... next time you consider submitting a "CUCK SHIT, cheating WHORE wife Apologist" story .... dig your own grave ASSHOLE!

Oh wait .... you never submitted another story once your CUCK ass got "1" bombed off of Cuckrotica!

As one smart commenter said "Come again when you can leave sooner". Glad to see you took the advice Shit for Brains!

Well, damn....

Dig Two Graves was written almost 13 years ago, and nothing by winterfox has shown up since.

Our loss...

Lots of comments dissecting the wife, not so many the husband, but enough to make the following point. The characters are who the author Wrote them to be--they are fictional creations specifically designed to convey the psychological and emotional states of the characters they represent--either stereotypically or nuanced. The best writers (in my humble opinion) convey a sense of their simple humanity, their flaws as well as their positive aspects--subject to making mistakes as well as good decisions. As such, it is farcical to attribute personality defects to an individual character--they were WRITTEN that way.

Whether I would have preferred this story to have a modified or totally different ending is irrelevant--it ended as winterfoxx wanted it to. If I want a different outcome then I would have to write it, and in no way do I feel qualified to do so. This story was excellent both in its composition and creativity, one of the best I have ever read in the Loving Wives category. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us in such an extended entertaining way. Will now go read more of your stories, expecting to find tales which match the quality of this one. 10 out of 10. (Is there a follow-up sequel dwelling in your mind somewhere? Would love to read one.)

MLJ

Apparently, a society like this is described as "advanced civilization"?

Geeze. The wife character was a sociopath. After her actions as a perpetrator, she wanted to reconcile? And he let her stay out of jail for that assault? A guilty verdict, followed by disbarment, and a divorce for adultery would have been about right.

The wife character was a real c*nt. I usually don't believe in revenge or BTB, but for this one an exception could be made. Geeze.

Okay, second time reading this story. Still an amazing story. I didn't know he regained his damaged nut. I totally thought he lost it on the first read. Good for this fictional man, I'm thinking now.

It doesn't excuse his bitch ex of a wife. In no way was anything she's done okay and excusable. Yes, she was abused. So was I. But she CHOSE to become an abuser. I did not. And it's not easy, okay? It's a fucking mental battle to not slip into a role you were RAISED to become. But guess what buttercup, you are a fucking adult. Play time is over. I have scars from childhood, and guess what...my kid grew up without ANY of the same abuse thrown my way. I didn't tolerate disrespect or rule breaking, but I made a conscious EFFORT to figure out what is okay and not okay...before I had kids....and while I was raising kids. Because it's constant learning when your role model sucks.

She ran from her desire to be an abuser. She avoided thinking about it. She actively ignored her own red flags. And when shit hit the fan and she KNEW it had hit the fan, she shrugged. Let's not forget that his ENEMY thought to bring him to the ER when she openly admits to wanting to dump his ass outside...maybe he'd die from exposure. Maybe he'd die from HER abuse. Who knows. She didn't care. That monster that almost killed him has the fucking stones to ask for friendship? I get the need for revenge and justice. But what happened to human decency? If you want someone to die...fine. But at least treat them like a fellow mammal you share a planet with. That level of malicious enjoyment for the suffering of others is actually alarming. That's some sociopathic shit. Both her enjoyment of dehumanizing and apathy towards it later.

She's actually worse than the shit that set her husband up to fail. But he's not playing her game. The worst thing a man can do to another man is ruin his status. But women HATE being ignored. So that's what he's about to do, put her ass in the rear view mirror and never ever look back. She moved near him, and tried to manipulate something. He didn't even give her a last goodbye fuck. Just listened to her whine, added a question, and told her to leave. That's how you deal with abusers. You leave them behind.

"I know that Jake," she says. "I'm not asking for reconciliation. But do you ever see us being friends? Maybe?"

Bitch, be grateful that you are not dead or in prison!!! You and your lover should have been made to suffer, then “disappear”. The second option is both of you in prison for years, then homeless under a bridge.

This MC only loved money. If he had actually loved his wife, or even just had the principle of loving the Truth, he would have ensured that she was punished for her choices.

Until there’s accountability again for actions, our society will continue to decline. Now is the time for hardass, Old Testament justice, even in stories.

ZK

She should have burned. Really bad. Mc was not mad enough for having lost a nut. 3/5

Nato_

Oh booohooo poor fucking Susie that Schmidt guy was right total and complete Cuckold

He should have burnt that bitch and never again trust his mother.

An ending so stupid and unrealistic it's beyond the pale. First to even be civil to this psychotic bitch after what she pulled is laughable. Second why aren't their changes made against her? Arresting her for assault at least.

No, once again a female writer (thankfully this was it) spripting another wimpy ass MC.

Winterfoxx obviously has domination and rape fantasies, and writes shit like this to make herself feel balanced.

A total joke...

Good story. Some things don't add up. A guy you turned down in college for date, has info on your cheating husband. Susie An ADA, a analytical thinker, evidence hound,doesn't stop and take time to think this all through, nor does she ever wonder why Schmidt is giving her this info. Then she allows Schmidt to plan the revenge against her own husband. So she is sleeping with a guy she wouldn't date in college. Most females would have reasoned Schmidt was up to something.

Why isn't she in jail for trying to rip his balls off?

I recently published a two-part story, "Filling the Second Grave", parts 1 and 2, based on a story by j267. The original was a great story, writing-wise. But DARK!! OHH, MAN!. I hated it. I love happy endings, and it took two parts to get it right. Your story was fantastic. It was a long,hard read, and took a lot out of me. BUT it was worth it. My wife worried about me as I couldn't stop reading it. 7 stars, the Bear wholeheartedly approves. I'm not saying I liked everything about the ending, as I am a big fan of physical payback, but making his life worthless was almost as good. But the angst and heartbreak were great; well written and nicely presented. Keep writing, and I look forward to reading more of your works. Take all the 'Anon's and throw them out. Don't sweat the small shit- and in the end, it's ALL small shit. The Bear likes your stuff, for what it's worth.

The BEAR

good story. like the trashing of the first consular and real ugly truth of her childhood at the last consular. Guess Susie should have been seeing a psych years ago.

I can't believe the wimp let those criminal duo schmidt and susie free from the charges - attempt to murder, illegal restrain, illegal confinement, fraud, conspiracy and humiliation...

Just for 6 millions.... Another form of prostitution...

Sell your emotions and feelings, also self respect... If the price is in millions

1* for this wimpy ending of a fine tale

While I liked the Story . I had some big problems with it . The Girl is suppose to be a big time ADA but She believes everything bad about her husband . I would not have settled for 6 million as I would have to leave town knowing that the Gossip would spread wherever I went . Not to mention the cruel things that Suzie had done to him . Heck even Schmidt said take him to the hospital .

I still don't understand why he and Bill.didnt just stand up in the law firm's conference room when the first offer was rescinded and walk out the door?

Take a few days to put the pieces all together in a nice little package. Take the criminal evidence to the police.

And file the law suit with the civil charges in court.

Why not burn every single one of those motherfuckers to the ground?

His assistant ADA wife gets arrested for the assault and illegal restraint. Loses her law license. Really fucks up her life. Because she deserved it.

The HR director goes down for the fraud and the conspiracy.

And Schmidt goes down for assault, illegal restraint, and the fraud/conspiracy.

And the law firm gets a literal kick to the balls. And I mean a VERY hard kick when all of the evidence is presented and shows how financially damaged he has become based on actions of senior members of the firm. Using the firms resources on on their property. As well as the manipulation of having the 2 perpetrators of the fraud ON the HR committee itself?!

Holy shit...he would have likely gotten a lot more than 6 million AND he would have been completely vindicated through the criminal and civil trials.

His ex is super fucking damaged. That bitch needs about 2 decades of therapy and should come with a warning label for all future potential relationships. "Warning. Maybe become dangerously irrational at the slightest hint of alleged unfaithful behavior. Capable of unpredictable and dangerous bodily harm upon becoming jealous. If you want to keep your balls intact think clearly every time you walk through the front door of your own home and do not, under any circumstances, allow her to restrain you in any way shape or form."

Seriously crazy bitch.

One would think that if the chinks in Schmidt's story showed to Susie that quickly that she would want to nail Schmidt's balls to the floor and possibly save the marriage

You either needed a part 6 or to stop at 4. What purpose did this solve at all? Like if you're going to go for the she's so broken she couldn't help it story you may as well ride the RAAC horse all the way. This provides no closure for the main character, in fact it denies him closure by attempting to make his wife less horrible than she was at all points previously.

You probably should have ended this series with installment #4!

There is no way to end this story with Susie still breathing.

Fucking stupid ending to an increasingly Annoying story

No happy ending, but that's how life goes.

If you're inclined to write for here again, I'd love to read it.

I am tempted to write the sequel to fill in the missing pieces, but I will pass.

One thing I think he should have done is burned Schmidt and Hinckley to the cops. I would have had his settlement with the firm not have anything preventing criminal charges from being filed. Might not have gotten as much $$$, and there might have been some embarrassment, but sometimes you really want to FUCK someone over!

Speaking of which, I'm surprised he didn't burn Susie a little more, although it does appear that she is "broken".

is one fucked up chick. And I suspect she'll have a really miserable life for years to come. How fucking hard would it have been to confront Jake first? And why not ask Schmidt "why are you showing me this"? I would have been curious why someone would have all this "evidence" and felt the need to share it.

Needs a followup BTB.

Destroy her. Otherwise, the plot is imbalanced.

Holy crap, what a fucked up crew. As laid back as I am, even I would be cutting Schmidt's cock off and feeding it to the hogs and I would do even worse to wifie dear. But what the heck - I'm a nice guy! ......

At least he didn't take her back...that would have really pissed me off..good work though

This story started off slowly but really got going towards the end of Ch.2. It was kind of like a modern-day Matlock or Perry Mason. Once all the evidence started to fit together it was getting really interesting. There was one bit of evidence that was mentioned at the hospital and then never was fully exploited. In my humble opinion it would have been a real bomb shell, ace in the hole or whatever you would have liked to call it. When Susie kept saying to Jake, he had no evidence, that she had an iron clad alibi, a girl friend who would swear Susie and her were together he only mentioned the CCTV footage of him being dropped off at the Emergency Room by Susie and Tim Schmidt, but when he was brought into the ER the attending doctor made note of what appeared to be semen on the side of his face and the rash on his arms and legs. That would have been an automatic trigger that they were dealing with a sexual assault, and they would have taken samples. that would have proven that there would have been three different DNA signatures. Obviously, Jake's because it was taken off his face, but also his wife and a third party, Tim Schmidt. Combined with his testimony that would have been, Game, Set, Match. No problem with the divorce, automatic. She would have been toast, well done toast if she swore to not being there at the time of the attack. All the rest of the evidence would have proved his case for wrongful termination precipitated by two principal members of management. The way that Tim Schmidt manipulated Susie Vickers could have been used by her lawyer to get a ruling of extenuating circumstances on appeal and have her ordered to get court ordered counseling and reduced sentence. Then her attitude and actions could have been explained in the end. I would hope that if the author ever decides to write another story or if others take inspiration from this story, they take these suggestions to heart. It was a great story otherwise. Too bad Winterfoxx only wrote this one story. Really enjoyed his style. 5 Stars overall. Thanks.

She was a piece of shit who got off lightly. My God l would’ve punished her every day of her life, the asshole bitch. Destroyed her completely. She like Schmit deserved nothing less.

Kinda a weird story. The so called main character through most of the story was flip flopping between pissed off and raac. Was a tad confusing, almost like you wanted it to be a raac but the story and character kept on pulling it away from you.

The so called loving wife was a raging insane nut job. But in the last chapter you made her out to be the only victim in the story. I think the author does not have a high opinion of men or women in general. Seems like all men are pigs, and all women are not responsible for their actions.

Very disappointed at the ending, as in there isn't one. All these chapters you write then you finish it with a nothing ending. 1*

Wow. One heck of a ride. I did notice that you flipped into present tense - I think that's the term - during the epilog and maybe back to past tense.

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There is a part in a previous chapter that sounded familiar to me, I think from another story that I read on Lit at some time in the past, because I don't remember reading this one. Though it's possible. The part is where between husband, Susie and their lawyers, hubby's lawyer shows Susie the pic of his sister and tells her about how she was completely mistaken to think he was cheating with another woman but wouldn't listen. I'm pretty sure I've read something similar in another story. In that other story, while the memory is vague, the wife gets the pic from private eye that was following hubby, maybe while hub was on a biz trip. It was his sister but the wife goes nuclear in her revenge, like in this story. Interesting concept - I like it - wife gets all upset and gets revenge, but the whole situation is innocent. Sorry to ramble. I like this story. Five thumbs up for all chapters.

Some physical payback for Susie would have been in order. But no..... Sorry, this was not for me.

Disappointed with the ending. WTF

I'm disappointed, really wanted Jake to bury the two of them in shallow graves. Instead he is being incredibly polite to the woman who destroyed his entire life. For what she did there is no being polite or civil. She should be burned forever.

Jake has serious cuck energy, to even be civil after what the fucked up cunt did is beyond the pale. And once again we have the old LW axiom of destroying the guy she cheated with but left the cheating slut unscathed.

Just another shit ending....

This is the worst conclusion on this site. My gods what a waste.

VERY LONG STORY!! Quite the mystery, with all the "behind the scenes" evidence! Nobody wins especially when it comes to revenge!

Much ado about nothing...

Wimpy cuckold husband

No revenge

No criminal cases

Nothing sever to make slut and conspirator ....payback

Just a plain divorce and job dismissal

This story series is one of the best on Lit.

Kinda wish there was another chapter. Definitely don't want the MC and Susie to get back together, nearly costing him his nuts is definitely something that can't be forgiven even ignoring everything else, but would have liked to explore what happens next especially with Schmidt and the other women in the office. Gave the entire story 4 stars, a very good effort but had some problems.

my god.....such a long story n this fucking wimp let the whoring bitch live.....wat the fuck happened to ur fuckin graves.....motherfucker stop writing

It's obvious his last testicle being saved was a waste. He needs to grow at least another dozen to quit being a wimp.

Great Story. Susie was really messed up. That's the only way to explain her actions and that is why Jake will never go back to her.

I read this story about every 2 years or so.

It's so good that I have to read it from start to finish without end even though I've read it previously.

It's easily one of the Top 10 Stories of this LW genre on Literotica.

The only bad thing I could say about it is that winterfoxx has never written another story here since his masterpiece.

still a fucking wimp

I hope winterfoxx keeps writing these type stories. I see he has only wrote CH01 thru CH05 and I have only read 3.4.5.

I gave winterfoxx a very good grade. He or she deserves it. Thanks winterfoxx for bring back some 60 year old memory's about my near disaster engagement to my first dear love. May she be living like she wants and not the dismal existence she maybe is.

Schmidt and that other woman committed any number of crimes, why on earth would charges not be pursued against them?

Very good story, a bit extreme but well told. How he could ever be civil to Susie is either a testament to his ability and empathy to understand the reasons for her extreme hatred and action or he really is a wimp or he still loved, how he could I will never understand, Excellent 5 stars

Great story. Though the victim had it worse than the wife and the perpetrators. It would have been better if they paid more for their crimes.

Discretionary funds????? And you use them to keep tabs on this asshole. He would be turning tricks at a gay brothel in mexico for 50 cents a shot. If he was even allowed to survive. As for the wife, up until the tuesday night. It would still been over, but at least we could have been civil. After Tuesday the only reason to go to an overlook would be to throw the whore off of it.

An extremely well written story that perhaps should have ended with the final lines of the last chapter. Susan's explanation for her actions was interesting but offered something of an anti-climax and no further resolution. Worth a full 5 stars though.

LA

honestly i dont see any vengeance in this story... for how the company handled everything and not to mention what he went thru deserves nothing short of scorched earth and then some. so yes that still makes him a wimp

Doctor suspected that. Should have had it swabbed and kept as a possible crime. DNA connect to Asshole.

Overall a good story. Once again tho, another story where the wife shoots first, then asks questions.

A great story although I thought that Susie's revenge on Jake was just too extreme. The damage Susie inflicted on his balls was verging on the psychotic.

Also, I didn't feel that the impact of for Susie finding out the truth about Jake being setup was sufficient. Given her mental state I would have thought she would have been close to a mental breakdown having discovered how she had been tricked and how much of a whore she willingly became.

I liked this story and I have very few negative things to say about it, but I think it should have been longer. That is a comment I believe is a first for me. There is actually plenty of plot to fill a longer form and some of the discovery feels a little shortchanged.

Write something again.

Just so sad that she was so damn stupid

@SpenceR#

Dallas police are better than that. The officer who interviewed Hubby at the hospital would have seen the drop-off and put it in his report. The lieutenant who interviewed Sweetie would have reviewed the video of the drop-off and recognized an ADA. Things would have unravelled fairly quickly after that. There are few prosecutors who haven’t soft-pedaled cases that police have presented as ‘good cases.’ In other words, protecting a public prosecutor regarding an ugly crime is not highly likely.

great story over all but there should be an epilogue. The ending just seems kind of lackluster. Leaves a little hope but also kinda of a cliffhanger as it could go either way. I think a few years down the road they could get back together with enough counseling. I know of a couple who went through eerily similar situations and after a few years of all the blowout and years of therapy got back together stronger then ever.

I was hooked by the first 4 chapters it was good and riveting for me so was looking forward for the final chapter. Kudos for the 4 chapters but I really feel the ending of the last one is a dud.

The video system at the hospital fully identified Susie and Schmidt dropping Jake off. Why then would Jake have not used that evidence to charge his two assailants with assault? It would have been a slam dunk and could have been the first blow in the revenge.

It was so pathetic