by JoeyAcrimonious
Sirin and Evie are wonderful characters. I fell in love with both of them partway through the second page. I will enjoy seeing their relationship grow.
Lots of little details- Little Eve insisting she's not short, Sirin worrying about sweating, Evie staring at her shoes. And great dialog between the two.
Thank you for the fun, sweet story.
And to you as well, anonymous commenter #2, thank you. I think my writing has a lot of rough edges but the characters definitely carry it.
I have to have more of those two girls. I hope you will tell more about them. Thanks for the story. 5 stars
Thanks for the kind words, anonymous commented #3 + brilliantDummy.
Probably some of the best erotic writing I've read, please consider writing a sequel <3