All Comments on 'Digit'

by JoeyAcrimonious

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was great! I loved the build up and trust between the characters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sirin and Evie are wonderful characters. I fell in love with both of them partway through the second page. I will enjoy seeing their relationship grow.

Lots of little details- Little Eve insisting she's not short, Sirin worrying about sweating, Evie staring at her shoes. And great dialog between the two.

Thank you for the fun, sweet story.

JoeyAcrimoniousJoeyAcrimoniousover 1 year agoAuthor

Much appreciated, anonymous commenter #1!

JoeyAcrimoniousJoeyAcrimoniousover 1 year agoAuthor

And to you as well, anonymous commenter #2, thank you. I think my writing has a lot of rough edges but the characters definitely carry it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I have to have more of those two girls. I hope you will tell more about them. Thanks for the story. 5 stars

brilliantDummybrilliantDummyover 1 year ago

I see no rough edges in your writing. It is wonderful!

JoeyAcrimoniousJoeyAcrimoniousover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the kind words, anonymous commented #3 + brilliantDummy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was very sweet, my partner and I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Probably some of the best erotic writing I've read, please consider writing a sequel <3

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