by JoeyAcrimonious
Probably some of the best erotic writing I've read, please consider writing a sequel <3
Thanks for the kind words, anonymous commented #3 + brilliantDummy.
I have to have more of those two girls. I hope you will tell more about them. Thanks for the story. 5 stars
And to you as well, anonymous commenter #2, thank you. I think my writing has a lot of rough edges but the characters definitely carry it.
Sirin and Evie are wonderful characters. I fell in love with both of them partway through the second page. I will enjoy seeing their relationship grow.
Lots of little details- Little Eve insisting she's not short, Sirin worrying about sweating, Evie staring at her shoes. And great dialog between the two.
Thank you for the fun, sweet story.