All Comments on 'Dindi Pt. 02'

a great story and illustrate cravings and desires with Travis and Morena that make this stand out. Loved it. 5.

Perfect!!

Phenomenal

This was unreal. You are so talented!

I am really enjoying this story

Such a great story. I love the chemistry between the characters. And now I'm wondering what haunts Travis's past....on to the next chapter!

Fuck this was so hot I am loving this so far! I came so hard to this Jesus Christ

Wow I really like travis! First chapter was a 3 but this one gets a 2.

I think I'll bail while there is a score to give. Try creating likeable characters. I don't like him as a main character and you would need a bunch of chapters to turn him around. I'm not waiting for them.

Your narratives are perfection. Pay no mind to the haters. This is true romance and beautifully written. I love Travis and Morena. They feel so real. Thank you.

I love the story has me 100% hooked. Keep it up I love your stories

I like the bit of mystery at the end. What was with the nightmare and the snow? I'm curious to find out more about Travis's past. You write both POVs very well, giving each character (even George) a distinct voice. I love how alive the characters are on the page. And that bathroom scene was luscious!