All Comments on 'Dindi Pt. 02'

I like the bit of mystery at the end. What was with the nightmare and the snow? I'm curious to find out more about Travis's past. You write both POVs very well, giving each character (even George) a distinct voice. I love how alive the characters are on the page. And that bathroom scene was luscious!

I love the story has me 100% hooked. Keep it up I love your stories

Your narratives are perfection. Pay no mind to the haters. This is true romance and beautifully written. I love Travis and Morena. They feel so real. Thank you.

Wow I really like travis! First chapter was a 3 but this one gets a 2.

I think I'll bail while there is a score to give. Try creating likeable characters. I don't like him as a main character and you would need a bunch of chapters to turn him around. I'm not waiting for them.

Fuck this was so hot I am loving this so far! I came so hard to this Jesus Christ

Such a great story. I love the chemistry between the characters. And now I'm wondering what haunts Travis's past....on to the next chapter!

I am really enjoying this story

This was unreal. You are so talented!

Phenomenal

Perfect!!

a great story and illustrate cravings and desires with Travis and Morena that make this stand out. Loved it. 5.