All Comments on 'Dinner for two'

Why is every word out of the "womans" mouth followed by baby? That was such a turn off. Also, he didn't need to state the fact that his cock was white, we got that.

Sorry mate, but its time to stretch yourself a little bit. All of the babies are getting old. It’s just a suggestion, but when you go to write the word "baby" (unless it refers to a little person) stop yourself. Unfortunately for you the majority of the writers of BF/WM fiction on this site are very strong. And when an interracial story is posted most of us who are into it tend to pounce on it. I think this is the second story of yours that I've read, and while I do think you're got talent your dialogue tends to let you down.

It's time to take it to the next level.

Loved it!

I feel that the previous comments will lead to a better job next time. However, "baby" aside, I enjoyed this effort. Keep at it!

Despite the handle...this story reeks of a woman. As in the author...

The way Alisha says baby in, before or after every sentence is kind of annoying but other than that this is a good story

Hate to say I find't finish the story, imho "baby" being in the story so many times and the talking during the sex scene kind of bored me :/

There's NOTHING wrong with a quickie as long as both parties agree!

If only it was that simple. But there are beautiful girls in many different shades of darkness. I've met a couple of real Nubian princesses from south Egypt who had me feeling all jumpy. The ticket taker at the Met in NYC was caramel perfection. I like black women, strange for someone who saw his first black person age 12.

R.

The use of "baby" in dialogue may have been a bit much, but not a problem. As an avid reader of interracial erotica, I can't get too much of talk of dark nipples, black pussies, and white cocks. It was a short but very hot and effective story. I hope you have more like it. Thank You.

-EbnyLvrBryan, via mobile phone.

[31.08.22]

Romantique und Zexxsi!

11/10!!!!!