All Comments on 'Dinner with my Wife in New Orleans'
by Chadwriteserotica
- 30 Comments
AccelarVester6 months agoThis one deserves a follow-up. How the husband finds out and how he reacts. It won't be pretty.
Impossiblefuture6 months agoPoor written from a 3rd person's point if view, how did her husband write what he wasn't aware of, clearly this writer isn't experienced with directing the words to indicate who is actually aware of what ever was going on, surely it should have been the wife explaining what happened not the husband.
Anonymous6 months agoSorry, complete turn-off for me. Might have been better received in either the lesbian or fetish sections.
LenardSpencer6 months agoHow can you possibly write from a Third Person point of view (The Husbands) when he was only present at the initial part of the dinner? All the rest, how can HE describe what was happening when he was still sitting at the dining table? You really need to rethink the POV aspect.
Plus, a 10inch strap on that was being worn under her jeans? Then the rest of the ridiculous story about the wife being fucked by two lesbians? LOL. Finally, her "instruction" to fuck every man she can, EXCEPT her husband and to send photos. Honestly, I admire creative writing but this is just garbage.
Anonymous6 months agoWell written but details not thoroughly thought out. No way do they get away with it. No way is a lady's room in a busy restaurant unused for so long. And I'm not usually one to quibble about category, but the story's central theme is definitely not "Loving" wives. Rape, plain and simple.
Anonymous6 months agoWow, that was a new level of stupid and, no surprise, posted in the wrong category.
Anonymous6 months agoLying wife. Not erotic, not entertaining. If she'd been honest, it could have been hot. But deceit is a turn-off for me. To each their own.
Anonymous6 months agoHot story, but totally unbelievable. How does a lesbian make her want men or cum?
ImNotanAnon6 months agoYou're a joke. You're ok with him beating the shit out of men who try it, but her going full slut with 2 waitresses in a bathroom stall is ok? 1 star for everything you post from now on.
Anonymous6 months agoNobody is that drunk with lust unless they were drugged. Why did you write this shit your other stories are good than you write this trash.
Anonymous6 months agoHuh? Another new writer that can’t shake off the Cuck and Slut plotline. Do you really need to make hubby so stupid he remains clueless to his wife suddenly going super slut? These nonstop portrayals of men being stupid, weak and perverted seems ridiculous. Just nonsense.
Anonymous6 months agoIt's amazing how he, the first person narrator, knows in great detail things that happen when he isn't there yet having first person knowledge.
Anonymous6 months agoDime a dozen these shit stories. Always the same crap, over and over. Stupid husbands, whore wives.
26thNC6 months agoYou posted two good stories today, and for some reason had to add this ridiculous lesbian story to your list. This one missed badly.
Anonymous6 months agoPlot has room for improvement. Nevertheless, it was good enough that it got me hard.
Anonymous6 months agoVery well written story! Putting it in the LW category really stirred up a hornet’s nest from the LDM’s who are convinced if this fictional erotica falls into the hands of their wives, they will dump their 3 pump and dump chump husbands for a 10” plastic dick! The jokes on them though because they don’t realize their wives have already done that!
A constructive criticism if you will allow me. Since you did post it in LW if you had included a post dinner conflict and resolution with hubby, it would have made for a more interesting read?
