All Comments on 'Dirks Donuts Pt. 03'

Awesome! Can't wait for your next story!

A fine ending to a very nice series.

You have come a long way in your writing. I enjoy your stories. The only fault I see is you cut the end a little fast. I don’t declare a favorite author but you are one of mine and I look forward to your presentations.

University of Idaho is in Moscow, ID. Not Billings MT.

I like your writing style and this story, my only disappointments were that we didn't get to hear much about the coffee shop after the first chapter and that would have been interesting, plus it would have been nice if they had named one of the daughters after Jennifer as she was quite an influence all the way through.

Great ending to your story!

5

5 from me, I agree with the comment on your improved writing. Two small points: The first probably doesn't absolutely require an edit, but you mentioned driving across Canada to Juneau in chapter 1. You can't really drive to Juneau. I guess the ferry ride from Skagway to Juneau could be inferred, but why not change the city to Anchorage. It's bigger, you can drive there, and it keeps continuity with ending the journey and not going to Russia. Second point is the University of Idaho is in Moscow.

You are getting predictable 😁 Another amazing story with plenty of romance and love, just like I like them. Thank you for your wonderful writing.

A very enjoyable series from one of my favorite authors. Always look forward to a post from the old refrigerator guy, R410a.

Pease, Brother

Cheers

SAGE

I love your stories, and this one is no different, but, it felt like the last part (pt. 3) was too rushed. You could have easily extended it a few more pages and made it a little more enjoyable. That’s why 4 ⭐️ instead of 5.

Just wondering as I haven't read any. Your work is fluid!

Great story all round. Love it. AAAA++++

Good story that could be better with an editor. Is “glammer” like prison glamour? Glammer in the slammer? The word conscious was used in place of conscience. There were a few missing letters in words, as well.

Should have stopped after part 2.

Great series. I thought however that one of his daughters might have been named after Jen. 5 stars.

Just a beautiful series.

That whole story was the greatest Story I've ever read. That includes your stories, (Which was better than any other author I've read.) This story just clicked from beginning to end. 12 stars

Thank you for another great story. I'm going through all of your 22-year stories now, waiting for you to right more great stories.

I really hate to say this but you should have stopped at Part one. Part one was excellent but the two followups were lackluster.

Very, very nice story. Thank you

A good finish to a reasonably good read, nice character choice ( for a change on this site) and a nice slow plot that didn’t get heavy

Wonderful happy instalment.

Great, really enjoyed it throughout.

Really enjoyed this one.

Your spelling needs a proofreader, not a spellchecker

Also the final chapter ends kind of abruptly with at least two decades crammed into almost the same number of paragraphs.

Hoping you find this constructive and not nit picking.

Good story