All Comments on 'Dirty Daughter'

So fricken hot! I can’t wait for the next one!

So few have courage to seek it

Too many distracting spelling mistakes.

Also, you need to learn how to use apostrophes to indicate possession. They teach this stuff in grade school, man.

Such a tease leaving off there...

Good story. A lot of typos that could have been caught in proofing, but still hot.

love to read more if you write another chapter?

Tits don't giggle, they jiggle, hopefully if you continue this or write something else, you will learn how to proof read

Would love to read more. Hope to hear about the panties he took

I liked this story. But he needs to show her that she belongs to him. Just like she needs to be an adult and tell him how she feels. That he truly belongs to her.

really obvious that she fully aware her father watching them listening them . . .

also obvious that she aware that her father wants do lots things that ( Ben )

literally did . . . I'VE DON'T WANT FATHER ALONG DAUGHTER

ALREADY GETTING IT ON . . . MAKE ( MIA ) ALONG ( BEN ) GETTING IT

ON MORE - ( MIA's ) FATHER DOES BECOME MORE INVOLVED THIS TIME

WATCHING THEM LISTENING THEM SECRET DISTANCE - ONLY THIS

TIME ONE OF THEM MAKES POINT THEY NOTICE HIM WATCHING

ALONG LISTENING . . . orrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr - MAKE ( MIA ) ALONG TEACHER

GETTING IT ON WHILE ( BEN ) AWAY - ALONG FATHER SUPPOSEDLY AWAY

BUSINESS TRIP - EXCEPT RETURNS HOME EARLY CATCHING THEM

AGAIN KEEPS SECRET DISTANCE . . . orrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr -

BECAUSE ( MIA ) SUCH SLUT - HAVE HER GETTING IT ON ONE OF HER

WOMEN FRIENDS POSSIBLY EVEN THAT's RELATIVE - FATHER DOES

RETURN EARLY CATCHING THEM WATCHING THEM LISTENING THEM

SECRET DISTANCE - ABSOLUTELY FLABBERGASTED SHE's GETTING

IT ON THAT WOMAN THAT's POSSIBLY THEIR RELATIVE

Very good beginning, would love to read the news next chapter.

Really good i hope you continue with this story

God ! More, we need more. It's been a month, bring it on...

More! It's so good more more more more more please