All Comments on 'Dirty Family Ch. 01'

I know a lot of people like a lot of different things, but to me this is discussing. Pissing, shitting, and puking on someone is sick. I didn’t give you any stars as I will not give this story a good mark. I don’t like to give low mark because I have no talent for writing and don’t to discourage anyone who tries. Thank you for the attempt but this was definitely not my kind of story.

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I like pissing but not shitting or puking. That is disgusting. And I didn't even see anything about the actual puking, just a mention that it had been done. But thanks for trying. But no one who actually ate chocolate would describe shit as tasting like it. Looking maybe, but not tasting.

Holy fuck. Terrible writing, nasty stuff and just terribly thought out. Gross. This should be deleted.

Nope. You can keep the poop and puke to yourself. It may be cool for others. Whatever floats your boat but I'm out.

Please never write another story as long as you live. This was absolutely terrible.

Hmm, This is by far the sickest story I've ever read, so if that was your intent, congrats - you've succeeded. God, I'm going to have nightmares!

I love it! There isn't hardly any scat lit. Rorget the other guy and keep it going. How hypocritical to talk down on someone's fetish when you wanna secretly F your mom lol. And if you like anal 9/10 there's it's dirty and smells like shit.. because that's what asses are and that's what makes them so desirable and if not stop pretending you like ass. Sorry most people are out of touch with reality. Great stories

W story. Can’t wait for part 2

What this writer(?) wrote about has absolutely nothing to do with being a nudist or "naturist". They don't take their clothes off to have depraved sex with family members! They take their clothes off to be uninhibited with nature.

nope..... not for me!

Piss, puke, and scat, what does this have to do with any naturist tradition?

Can anyone tell me a name of story or the link .where mom and son talks on skype video call, and mother close her camera but the son is able to see his naked mom and later son also do the same intentionally .

Dont worry what others say, each to their own, live and let live! Carry on writing and get part two out ASAP

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Don’t care about bitching of “nudism”. Wonderfull story with nice slow development to deep depravity. Please keep it going. thx

I enjoyed this story. Thanks for adding to the paltry amount of mother-son scat fiction on this site. And regarding the anonymous haters—screw them. Follow your muse wherever it takes you.

Love the story. Has everything I really like. Hope you keep it going.

Loved it. Hope Chapter 2 is in the works. Even better if you introduce a daughter so we can have a scat fuelled incestuous 3 way. Keep writing xx

She could have Brought The SHIT into the 'Mix' a bit sooner maybe and 'Lubricated it with Both their pisses' But... that's being pedantic! Great Story ten, no Eleven, out of ten.

Pity the story wasn't longer. Maybe add a daughter xx

DD tits that only sag a little at 40???? Addd in a 1`0 inch cock. I quit reading.

Yessss

That was nicely done dear. I hope you will read my stories. I love good shit play

That was so nasty, I loved it. My stories are just as nasty, please read some