by Daddysgirlfl
You never fail to surprise me, just when I think that it can't get any better, it does.
There is so much here that is so very good, that I hope you find it worth your time to get an editor.
This story deserves an editor, you deserve an editor, a fresh set of eyes that would set you free to be excellent as you hone your writing.
Good luck, and thanks for this story of Dolcezza.