All Comments on 'Dirty Old Man & Alice Ch. 02'

You should continue with this story. There are many other kinky situations to explore.

I absolutely love this series! I am definately looking forward to hearing more of Alice's adventures..Hmm...Maybe have Mr. Burns teach Alice a few lessons at her own house!

Enjoyed both stories, had me wiggling in my seat. thankyou!

I loved both stories. I love stories where naive young girls get in over their head. I'd love to read more about Alice's adventures, especially if they include some public humiliation. Having met men like Mr Burns, I know there's a lot more he could do with her.

Very nice. Short, complete but with a lingering sense of what next? There's no reason she couldn't have had a safe word? IDK

Thanks

Hott

I loved these stories. You must keep writing more. It is the best I read. I love ones where girls are lured into things like this. Super well done!

Lx P

Great job. The only thing left out was a few more positions but this story is still a 5 and I've given out a very few 5's.

Good character development, more please. More non consent for her from you.

Like your style, thanks for your story, however, I always feel cheated when this is the sex act:

split in two as he forced it deeper and deeper toward it's widest point, especially with Royce's monster cock still deep in my pussy.

Finally the thickest part popped inside my tight ring..."

Would have really liked to hear more about the invasion, how she panted while he tried several times to push it in, the feeling of being stretched. Maybe some protest. How it was uncomfortable, but good at the same time, maybe shameful. This is non consent.

You have a good style, keep writing, more mental description on her part.

Thank you.

Please come back and write more. This could be a long series.

where is chapter 3?

This needs a chapter 3