All Comments on 'Dirty Old Man & Alice'

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The_NexusThe_Nexusalmost 6 years ago
Fun story

This is a really good fun little story. Leaves you wanting MUCH more!

merrySMmerrySMalmost 8 years ago
She was a little too interested

Good story, character development, but she definitely was consenting, except in one item.. She wanted it too much from the beginning, she persued him. However would like to read more by this author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

What story was the other commenter reading that he thought there was no nonconsent? ...because it looked to me like the old pervert just raped her in the ass after she clearly told him •No•! Hell, I'm betting she goes home once she feels like she can safely get out of there and calls the cops and presses rape charges. I sure as fuck would, lol.

Story was pretty well written, she just had no clue as to what she was getting herself into. No real discussion as to what was going on, no safe word, etc. Just a creeper, heh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Where's the nonconsent shit?

Please, put it in another session. This is not even close to a non consent story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Nicely written, I enjoyed this story a lot!

FantasymasterFantasymasteralmost 16 years ago
Dirty old man

A good story...I thought he might get a lot dirtier with Alice.

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