All Comments on 'Discovering Amy Pt. 03'

Made me hot

Continues to be a good premise.

Continues to move along too fast. Seems designed to be like that with 30 minute maximum time that was set.

OK, he's got her pussy naked. What does it look like? Is it hairy? Color hair?

He doesn't even smell, no less taste his fingers after playing with her pussy? Why?

She doesn't do anything to him much except allow him access. Reciprocity, of some kind, needed.

Four stars.

Anonymous: it's very obvious you didn't even read the story, because he absolutely smelled his fingers after touching her. But thanks for your "constructive" criticism.

Funny thing talking with friends at there very religious home. They were teasing me about if I know and used exactly the same words tab a into slot b as another commentator at which they were Shoshone me incase there folks heard

One step at a time makes the grade. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.