All Comments on 'Discovering Boys Ch. 01'

and very very soon

And the sooner the better :-)

What a tease! You are a good writer. I could imagine this really happening to me and the uncertainty of how to react! Can't wait till they end up in the sack together.

This is an erotic, suspenseful, well-written story. Please keep it coming. I won't say you should post again fast, because I prefer finely-written to fast. I find that hasty submissions often disappoint because they are usually not proof-read and poorly edited, which will kill the greatest of plots. You are good.

Great story and writing. Can't wait for more, such a hot and horny story

Any time you write that someone "couldn't help but" - delete it. It's weak writing and distracting. Use fewer words and your writing will be stronger.

very well written story.

Good start on the story. I'm not much for kissing a guy, I just want to suck his cock. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I LOVE kissing men, and reading about two men kissing. (I also like sucking and being fucked but there will be time for that later!)

You've got my attention. It's a great start. Looking forward to reading more.