Discovery of the Moment Ch. 07

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"Oh," I said numbly, still not catching on to why she'd mention him now. "What about him?"

"You want us to disappear like him. Take our vengeance out on the worst criminals in the world but be invisible. They don't fear God, but they'll fear us. Like Keyser Soze." She tossed another bite of food into her mouth, now feeling more animated and getting into the spirit of things. "Okay. I can understand that. It even makes sense. But why do we have to sell the house? I mean, that's our house, Dad. I grew up there. It's our home. We've got so many good memories-" Then she put the fork down when I didn't say anything. She was right, it was our home and she did grow up there and there were so many memories attached to it. She watched me and the look on her face softened to tenderness. "Oh, Dad, I'm sorry. God, how I could I have been so stupid? It's killing you, isn't it? That's exactly why you want to move. It's got to be driving you nuts, not seeing Mom around anymore. Everything is still pretty much the way it was when she was alive and, even if we changed every stick of furniture, there's still the memories of her. Every room, every picture... God, Dad, I'm so sorry. I didn't realize..." Her hand reached out to mine and held it there in the center of the table.

"Yeah," I answered meekly as I stared at our hands. "That pretty much covers it."

When I looked back up at her, Kelly's eyes had begun to tear up in sympathy. "You know what?" she said with a loving smile on her face. "Let's do it. Sell the house, Dad. Sell everything. We'll start completely over and put the past behind us. Just you and me. Clean slate. I'll ask around and see if there's a way that we can change our names or something, get totally new identities. I think I know of some friends who can help us and keep quiet about it. We'll disappear and start fresh. And, if anybody comes looking for us, they'll find that we've just dropped right off the planet, destination unknown. Fuck 'em all."

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

At first I was rattled by the rape of the women - I'm sure many were. But then I decided to change my perspective to evaluate the circumstances more objectively.

What did he really do? OK, yes, there is the issue of consent. She didn't agree to be fucked. That being said, she has no knowledge that she was actually fucked and he didn't leave any evidence or harm her in any real way, such as impregnating her or leaving her with memories of a trauma. No, all she felt in the end was pleasure, from some unknown source. Is that really so bad? Tell you what, if I got a random fucking orgasm I wouldn't complain. Even if it meant someone raped me but I had no pain or memory of it. Go for it. Give me pleasure. Knock yourself out. And I guarantee her boyfriend wasn't complaining when she took him home and fucked the shit out of him thanks to her being so fucking horny after that orgasm. It's all about perspective really.

I guess the core of the issue for many people is the fact he did it without her consent. But let me ask you this: does life ask for your consent when it fucks you over? Yeah, I didn't think so. And the intention here wasn't to cause harm; he did it to give her pleasure. Yeah, there was a selfishness in the action, too, but there wasn't any malice behind it. Anyway, this could be debated endlessly so I'll stop. Everyone reacts differently and has their own opinions.

One last thing I would say is that with the kind of power he has, anyone in that position would inevitably give in to temptation and abuse it in some way. It doesn't make them good or bad; only human. It could be a lot worse.

Budson1962Budson1962over 4 years ago
Nice

Another great chapter! Can’t wait for the finale

TongueHungTongueHungover 6 years ago
I agree with anon

She should have gotten in on it. As you said before...if you're in for a penny...be in for a pound

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I think that scene was hot. It would be hotter if he came inside that girl and his daughter ate her out.

Captain MidnightCaptain Midnightabout 10 years ago
And now rape of a helpless woman

What would his wife and her mother say if she knew? That the people she loved the most paved their own way to Hell by brutalizing innocent people as well as guilty ones? That there is a great unbridgeable gap between them. Heaven won't be much fun for her, if she's there, knowing that her husband was unbelievably cruel and drew their daughter into his evil. He could have resisted the temptation but he didn't. I know he did many good thing, but in my pessimistic world view they don't balance out and the evil that men do lives forever and so does their punishment in Hell.

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