All Comments on 'Disobedience'

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SensualCurvesSensualCurvesover 19 years ago
Very good Discipline

I enjoyed this story. Well thought out and put together. A rebellious sub gets her just desserts! Well done!

panthers babepanthers babeover 19 years ago
Puurfect

This story did an excellent job of showing a subs need to please at the same time they scream for independence. the details wer excellent

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well rounded.

Shows the use of both the power and the love. Good development in both characters phyches. Hottly written, but still very sensual.

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