All Comments on 'Disruptive'

Any man who has had the misfortune to work in an office dreams of this from about 2.30pm onwards. But it’s knowing how, and why, and how deeply your character wants this too...that’s what makes this so special.

I have already read this story before and it accomplished what good erotica should...it aroused me. The flow was smooth and genuine. I could almost picture the author being in the same state while writing it.

That brings more fire to the story and the main character. Even with it being such a short submission, the author has managed to build a strong enough character to leave me wanting completion. I look forward to the actual arrival at the office.....if that’s even where you go with it. Reading it again will be a guilty pleasure.

You write: "I'm still not sure how I can make you want me as much as I want you."

The stratagem described in this story would certainly succeed!

Great idea and very well written.

Inside the mind of BFG.... it's a place I'd enjoy for sure :)

open your mouth a bit wider so I can skull fuck you, you fat ugly cunt

Sweet Just enough to drive the reader crazy. Love teasing and you do it well.

How is this story so poorly rated? So creative and well written. A wonderful tease, leaving the reader aching for more. Definitely tickled my imagination, and left me desirous for disruption.