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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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It seems a pity for these two to only have sex the once...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The first few paragraphs it was ambiguous whether the narrator was man or a woman. You could try to make that more clear so the reader knows earlier I'm the story.

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12/27/2023 Update: - Working on something new - Mrs. Young: 7th and final chapter is pending at this time * Amateur writer here. I have a day time job and this is a hobby. Thank you for being kind :) I like to write realistically. I enjoy reading any feedback and will respon...