All Comments on 'Distractions Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I really loved your story ... Keep writing : ) And I really am happy you posted so sooon : )

BYEEEEEEEEEE

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69over 15 years ago
Woo! Loved this part! Nice background!

Keep going!

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 15 years ago
Great as always!!

Thanks for the background!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GOOD STUFF

I really liked this chapter. We got a glimps into their past and even though she saw him as one thing we can clearly see that his feelings for her started around then. Great updated. I can't wait to see what happens next since they have already had sex.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
This was a great update!

I'm so glad we finally got to hear about the bonfire! She needs to let go of her teenage viewpoint and look at it again for other possibilities. It's cute to see that Gavin fell for her way back then and has been fighting it for years. Now she just has to realize it. Or he has to tell her. I can't wait for them to come together honestly, with no pretenses. It'll be explosive. Can't wait for Chapter 5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
goood :]

i liked the background i like how gavin was in love with red back then cant wait to read what happens next goood job.

dylan_Jdylan_Jover 15 years ago
vey good work

i havent read the story yet but skimmed through it so i know it is a great one. you have talent and keep up the good work. bless

LovableCherryPieLovableCherryPiealmost 11 years ago
why is she so insecure?

i liked this part but it´s annoying how the female lead always thinks everyone finds her inattractive

6King6Kingalmost 2 years ago

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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