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She'd fallen in love that day, gained an amazing father-in-law who would do anything for her, and now she had the beautiful child she'd always wanted. There was also a very nice home she loved, but it paled in comparison with the love she'd found thanks to one tiny little mole that had torn up her yard.
Now, anytime she saw Chris watching the PGA tour on TV she smiled at the mention of a divot as she recalled the 'divots' in her lawn that had brought them together and given them the most beautiful little girl ever. Doubts and trials aside, it was truly a very wonderful life.
- COMMENTS
SexySenior566 months agoLoved the conversations on the origins of life on the planet, and the possibilities/plausibilities of a God. Loved the romanticism of the plot line. However, you missed a couple of outstanding opportunities for some really hot, steamy sex scenes!
RRC26 months agoYes, Komrad is preaching within the context of a love story. I am not amazed that Komrad is a pretty good preacher, too. I knew next to nothing about his subjects, but it was interesting and well presented. No complaints and my standard (it is, after all, Komrad) five star applause.
THANKS
oldsage_16 months agoGreat story, depth, humor, romance and handling a delicate subject with respect and dignity. Well done indeed, Marine. Only nit I can find is why is this dude an Air Force jockey instead of one of one of our Navy or Marine Air compodries? I said it was a nit! 😉
You keep writing them the way you like and I'll keep reading them. If I find one I don't like I won't read it and move along and find something else more palatable. Ooo-Rah and anchors aweigh!
Cheers
SAGE
bhill86716 months agobut I just couldn't get into the story. There is nothing wrong with the story; it is just not my cup of tea.
Oldbutbold6 months agoAfter reading other comments for this story , those that complain about preaching and so on , i do believe that Komrad does say he writes for his own pleasure and reasons , not just to appease the readers , there are thousands of other stories on Lit to choose from , maybe go read one of those , and leave Komrad's stories , to those of us that enjoys his work .
Oldbutbold6 months agoYou are either a very clever and knowledgeable man , or you read and research your chosen subject , i cannot fathom which lol .
But what i do know is you can write a story on any given subject , and make it interesting , you use words i never knew existed ,so i have to look them up using my old school Dictionary (not google lol ) , and how you manage to weave the meaning of life into a sex story well it beats me , but you did it , and now you have given me food for thought on this subject (not sure if i should thank you or beat you with a feather lol . So i i can do is give you 5 stars and get all the books i can find on Deism .
But as always thankyou for your time and effort given to writing for us your readers .
