by ElderDirt
Man, I've got to find a Chinese woman like Kami! Loved it and thanks for the inspiration.
Very good, an enjoyable tale, I too enjoy chinese cooking but I'm afraid too long in the tooth for any of the other chinese delights mentioned. But you are in my list of favourites so if you serve up any other tidbits or morsels I shall be sure to sample them. Thanks for this.
I really have only one criteria for judging fiction. Does the story capture my interest, and hold it throughout without me "crashing-out" of the tale. It doesn't much for me fall out of the story....unbelievable characters, too many coincidences, or just "that doesn't sound right".
This story caught my attention from the first paragraph, and never let go. Nice job.