All Comments on 'Do the Right Thing?'

Very realistic and believable. Can't wait for the next installment. 5 stars for sure...

I've been awaiting the next story! Now for Part two. This one is very different from your others. Keep it up. Cape Cod

I'm impressed. You are one helluva writer.

I love this story. The writing is great and the story was presented in a way that was really erotic and intimate. I cannot wait to read Part II. Sooner than later please.

You are a very talented writer. I am enjoying your story and hope you continue it.

Looking forward to 2. 3*

Althea Rose,

You written another winner.

I am impressed that Charly has Hank as a sounding board, a very good literary device. She does need advice, in that I see her using her Girl Power unwittingly, pulling Nate closer. Treading on thin ice, so they say.

And Reggie? He won't go down on her? And is squeamish about his cum on/in her after sex? That is, to me (who loves leftovers), disturbing. The little voices in one's head sometimes tell the truth. I have the feeling that a separation is possible, even were Nate not there at all.

More later, but you should be proud of your Wordsmithing. I am.

Thanks.

I love your writing, I felt very connected, and lost myself in the story. I hope we hear about what happens on the hike! Thanks

Lots of sexual tension, human frailty, and suspense. I'm already checking for the next part's arrival..

You are clearly one of the best authors on Lit. As others have already pointed out, your writing is very well done.

This is no brainless sexfest. You've written a very powerful story that's emotionally taut, while sprinkled with humour. You've created lovable yet humanly flawed characters (especially Hank and Charlotte), great dialogue, compelling action, and a strong plot - a winning combination! Please message me on the Lit feedback page when you release chapter 2. I don't want to miss it!

I usually read mainly the male gay stories, but this is really sexciting. It's a great story line, and so realistic. Straight women often "buddy up" with gay guys for friendship without sexual intimacy as Charly and Hank do. It's probably a pretty healthy friendship.

As a gay reader and also a lover of nakedness I think this is absoluty one of the hottest stories I have read. Looking forward to Chapter 2. The phone sex scene was mindblowing! Variety is the spice of life and Reggie needs to be open to trying other avenues. I would get tired of oatmeal every morning for breakfast too.

A good, slow build up, character development, and quietly sensual. The believability of the 'Charly' character works really well. A great opening!

You're story was great! Can't wait to see the next installment.

Really interesting erotic story from female perspective. Looking forward to part 2.

Charlies all ready playing, that's why its called phone sex. Reggie you better get a move, going down is a great cheat if your a average lover. Oh, kiss the girl. Start off on her upper lips, then when you want, or let her ask, go lower lips.

Good story, nicly poised to go in a few directions.

Look forward to reading chapter two.

Awesome story can't wait for chapter 2.

Loved the phone sex parts especially when Nate tasted his own cum. Do that all the time.

Also loved how Charly was exploring her exhibitionist side. Definitely something I enjoy as welll

This is the first story of yours I have read, and found the style very appealing. The conversations sound real, with is difficult for a lot of writers.

I will be waiting with the others for the next chapter.

If Charlie was a real person, I am betting that she is very intelligent. Smart people make the best lovers since they are creative and fun.

She is doing what she can to keep things going, but her boyfriend is not. He knows what he likes and sticks with it. You do not vary your sexual routine because things are getting stale, you do it because you are imaginative!

Thanks so much,

M142

Look forward to next chapter

Well written and looking forward to the next chapter.

Very nice job. I can't wait to read the rest.

This one held my interest from beginning to end. Characters were well-developed and situations and questions were realistic. There is real conflict for the main character here, and I can't wait to see how she resolves it.

Thanks-Good story and nice writing-A pleasure to see someone who can use the English language without a problem.

First of all, great story 5*! I'm Charly and my wife is Reggie! I want to do the exciting stuff, and my wife wants to stay in the bedroom. I love to eat her. She never gave me a blow job! Looking forward to part two in which I'm guessing Nate gets to do Charly! She's definitely in the wrong relationship with Reggie.

I quit reading E&V stories because they are mostly too fetish-related for me. They seem immature.

This one is not. It's beautifully written with full blown characters and an interesting story. Looking forward to Ch.2

Excellent pacing, and very well written. You tease, and then deliver. A pleasure to read. I think I'll read all of your submissions, to make sure it's not an accident.

Great story arc --nice tension building and not too many gross out details. Wish I was in a writing class with you! Thanks and keep up the story telling. Slightly older fan.

I am loving, aside from the sexy parts, the New England references galore. :)

Very well written. It got me so so hot!

I have favorited you and this story. I can't wait to read more but I'll pace myself.

Wonderfully story telling. Always wanted to meet a woman like Charley. Poor her being held back by Reggie!

When my husband I were dating her used to always try to find ways for his friends to catch me naked. I loved it, he loved it and his friends sure loved it. The best was the time he had them over for the Super Bowl and he had me wear one of his mesh jerseys with only a thong on underneath.

5 Stars.

Can't wait to start the next chapter.

So much joy in this, exuberance, pleasure in simply being hot. And good and direct about fairness in giving and receiving blowjobs and eating each other and kissing after.