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knuts1knuts1about 4 years ago

I cant wait for his b-day!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice premise

Nicely written.

What could have been better? Longer lap dance with more teasing. There was practically no boob action. There could have been more dialog between them about what she was going to do to him, what he wanted her to do, what he wanted to do, and not such abbreviated fingering and pussy eating.

Gave it four stars. Could have been five stars.

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKabout 4 years ago
very good

hope the ladies practice for the birthday boy!!!

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