by Dinsmore
Not so sure about sex in the labor room, though! Having gone through that with my wife three times, sex was that last thing that she wanted at that time. However, the basic plot makes for a great short story.
Gosh the little women are going to love this new rule and the men - well somebody's got to push things along.
Nice work Author
With Higher Regard
I enjoyed this very much. As I finished reading it, I realized that I've read enough of your stories that I would have recognized it as one of yours even if your name hadn't been attached to it. And familiarity doesn't breed contempt; just the knowledge that when I see your name as the author, I will be in for a most enjoyable experience.
Boyd
i lost faith in love a long time ago.
thank you for making me believe in it again.
but still pretty nice.
The initial relationship (or fucking-ship) was rather distaseful - she wanted a meal ticket - he wanted a fuck partner - but it did turn out all right.
Not the big emotional involvement that I've become used to from you - but still all right.
Heh - nice roots and great branches too.
I have to admit, I almost didn't read this because of the title. Even the sparseness of the Tags nearly deterred my reading. I am glad now I took the time, it was worth it. For such a Spartan start, the ending was very romantic and rewarding.
thanks
I didn’t like this story as much as I liked some of the other stories by this author. This one was okay, I’d probably rate it about 3 stars. What I do wonder about, though, is what has happened to this author, Dinsmore. I have seen anything new posted by him in years. I miss reading something new by him. Not all of his stories were great, but a good number of them were just freaking Outstanding. Hope he’s doing okay, and I sure wish he’d post some new stories.
I once heard a phase that aggravates most women. ‘LOVE IS A DECISION, NOT A FEELING !!’ I believe your story portrays that pretty well. So many people marry for feeling ‘in love’ and then divorce when they no longer FEEL ‘in love’. I believe our society would be so much better off if people would marry based on a commitment and NOT a feeling. But hey, that’s just my opinion ! I don’t know that I have read many of your stories (I think this was my first) but I will read more :)
A woman being that honest stretches the suspension of disbelief for me... but it is a very nice positive story so easy 5 stars.