All Comments on 'Doc and the Porn Star Ch. 03-05'

As Siskel and Ebert (sp?) used to say; 'Two thumbs up! Way up!'

Great story. Well written. Wish I could have my own Jasmine.

I have enjoyed the story so far - but Beth said:

"I've never been with another woman, but boy am I ready now."

and..

Beth responded to the question "You and your daughter play around?"

With:

"For the past two years, yes. I love her as a parent AND as a lover."

I loved your first installment, but adding incest and male homophobia to the mix, looses me.

I quit reading Loosening Up because it became kind of the same old hum drum thing chapter after chapter. However, the first chapters up to Dave and Alice taking other sex partners were the best of the series. I hope that this series does not take the same tack. The sex is great in the first 6 chapters. Doc seems to be reliving a life he wishes he could have had with Edie. All of us 50 or 60 plus males wish we had access to the vitamins and supplements he takes. I think that some of us wish we had a life like this with our wives. A 4* rating.

What would I not give to be part of a group like this,wallowing in cunt, eating and fucking cunt at the same time. Fucking mother and eating daughter while finger fucking another beautiful cunt. Totally pissed up on cunt juice and fuck lust, blissed out with insane sexual pleasure.

I have always liked Steve Wallace's writing. I still like the Loosening Up series best.

WildBill_Texang