by The_Dreamscaper
Its a nice storie, unfortunately it sounds allot like 6 times a day ...
same story, mother takes him to doctor and she "helps" him. Same super large size and amounts
Love it and I hope there are a couple of more chapters. I'm sure Mom and Dr. will have to have a little lezzie action too, and both women getting really fucked in all six of their holes--REPEATEDLY. Ah, yes, of course it is fantasy, but fun.
Another sad variation on the "I've got an enormous cock and here's how I fucked X women in Y Days" theme. A little imagination would go a long way.
that was really hot I can't wait to read the next part !!!!
not believeable, need work on your plot,why the big cock story x 1000s...done to death,boriiiiiiiiiiing, come up with something different
A familiar plot, but I am eager to see how you develop it. Has the potential for being very good.
Six Times a Day did this plot first and was more developed in that aspect as well, but I still like this story on its own. The more fap material, the merrier. That's All States stand, wait, that's my stand :) So what there a so many big cock stories, as long as the story is hot and I can crank to it, I don't care. Why else would a mother sleep with her own son anyway if he didn't have a fat cock? Seems plausible to me ;) If the a son had a small penis and tried to put the moves on the mom, she would look at it and send him packing. But with a huge one, the son might be able to get some where *evil grin*, like in her panties.
Okay, maybe he over did it in this one, with the mammoth giant gargantuan cock feature, but in general i like the stories where the son has a shall we say bigger than average package. One less thing to push the mother AWAY from the taboo. And we all know we want her smack damn in the middle of the taboo :)
Great job, please continue writing this series and/or others!!! Thanxxx a bunch.
Hot and funny---made me horny and sent me laughing. Thanks@
If you are going to write a story it should be your own piece of work. Don't take the work of others and submit it as your own.
Six Times a Day in plot, doesn't mean it's plagiarism. He wrote his own story based off a similar premise. With original characters, settings, and language, this is far from plagiarism. More like getting inspiration from 6 times a day than "ripping-off" it off. Should be seen as flattery, not stealing. If he had hi-jacked phrases or sentences from the story, then that would be stealing/plagiarism.
I havent read six times a day . so I cant say if its the same , but after all these years of lite erotica I can say Its a wonder if some parts of any story doesnt mirror some one elses I liked it I had a good chuckle at the youths expence thx Im off to look up six times lol.
you all are talking about? I can't find any references to this using standard searches...
Loved the story - personally I don't care if the plot is reused, maybe the author plans to take the next few chapters in different directions than the originals...
six times a day, is by spacerX
the text version of the story is here on literotica,
try searching the author name.
or you can find the Illustrated version here:
url=http://six.darksideofpassion.com/
Yes, the giant cock is a terrible cliche and the situation is totally unbelievable BUT I love medical fantasies and incest fantasies so I must say I ejoyed this!
Eliza
Spent a while searching for this cause I discovered it with story spinner. But even if it is a little close to another story; it doesn't matter. There really aren't all that many original ideas out there anymore. Hell, the 3 submissions of mine came from reading other things on Literotica.
Roticwizard
... You wrote: "Do you mean masturbation sweaty?">>>Why would his mom call him 'sweaty'? Is it his nickname, or did you mean to type 'sweety'? I'm just a bit confused.
I was wondering if she was referring to his palms?
Good story!
I think I've read this one before, but it was still a good read.
Thanks for the post.
...it's great to see Freshly Dirty's comments. F.D. is himself the author of fabulous stories of hot mom fucking. He was 18 to 22 years old when he wrote them, as was Dreamscaper when he delved into this most exciting kind of sex---a boy snuggling his stiff young prick up his mother's mommy-twat, plugging away, and unloading his hot young balls up his own fucken birth canal (OH, MAN!). No doubt both boys were rock hard when they wrote, it's the way boys get when they dwell on that wonderful hole between their mother's legs. It's heartening to see real young guys like Freshly and Dreamscaper getting together to probe the delights of mommy's cunt. I trust and hope that in the intervening years both Freshly and Dream have been enjoying their own mother's warm wet hole, cozy and comfy like none other, and emptying their brimming young balls where their rich creamy semen's meant to go---right up their mother's cunt!
I've read a storyline similar to his one but this is still a good read.
Thanks for the start.
You desperately need an editor or you need to learn how to spell. On the first page alone, "Sweaty" should have been "Sweety," and "waste" should have been "waist." There are also numerous typos.
And the Nurse would call him by his real name: Robert (unless his parents were cruel enough to actually name him Bobby).
That aside, it's better than 6TAD.
I have read this story before and liked it then and I still like it and for the rest of the chapters they are just as bloody good and I'm now heading of to read all of them again and I bet I still like them as much still also, so with that see you later
Ich freue mich auf die weiteren Kapitel dieser dem Fetisch der MASTURBATION huldigenden Geschichte. Meinen expliziten Dank an den Autor (leider kann ich mich nicht so gut auf Englisch ausdrücken) !
This was better. Six Times A Day was trying to set a record for longest erotica story so the writer fucked with his readers by repeating the same trysts for literally hundreds of pages. This story doesn't do that. Six Times A Day sucked because the wimpy author makes no one in the story related, which removes it from the incest category and makes the story ridiculous. This was fun. Six Times was tedious.
I've sucked a lot of men over the years, and been fucked by quite a few of them. I've only found two who were an honest seven inches, let alone anything as big as is always referenced in stories like this, Get real!
...a HUGE dick and chicks with gigantic boobs.
Nothing cliche´ about that...nope.
Borriiinnnggg.
Sex was hot, though.
Minus one star for the giant boobs.
Minus one for the insanely-sized dick.
Standard deductions, sorry.
Oh to be bles..er...cursed with Bobby's problem. A great start, looking forward to reading how Mom and the Dr. both have their way with Bobby. A very acceptable stroke story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.