All Comments on 'Does She Not Know - Angle 02'

Great story, love what you are doing here - the first story is sexy and well-written, but this segment does just enough to evoke the previous story to really stay true to the “notations” concept. Bravo!

So sad with all of the build up that they don't consummate their obvious love for one another and stay together forever which is where I thought the story was leading or I wouldn't have started reading it. Now I'm just depressed.

WOW. Fantastic writing. Let me know when you have more chapters written. I loved it

I'm confused with the change of direction - or is it really???

Im hoping for the 3rd one to be a happy ending, otherwise man..

@Lookoldbutfeelyounger

:)

Angle 3 may clear things up.

Okay, so this wasn't even close to what I was expecting from the leading up to the release. 😳

Honestly, I was expecting an essay from the sister that parallels the brother's account of what happened. Instead, you have the brother's account committed to a document that we read. Then the sister reads what we just read and expounds upon it by sharing the "behind the scenes" from her recollection of the events.

It's still entertaining even so. She certainly seems to be more in love with her brother than he is with her, which is sad. His account was like he was lusting for his sister more than loving her. He was very detailed about her physical attributes and less forthcoming about her character. His only emotional feelings were derived specifically from their intimacy. She, on the other hand had a mission to accomplish because she was attracted by who he was more than the physical.

That's a very interesting ending where she commented on the fact that she had personally hand picked her replacement and potentially the future sister-in-law. 😀 4/5 only because I would have rather read an independent account from the sister instead of her reaction to what her brother wrote about.

"Okay, so this wasn't even close to what I was expecting from the leading up to the release."

[insert giddy laughter]

"Instead, you have the brother's account committed to a document that we read. Then the sister reads what we just read and expounds upon it by sharing the "behind the scenes" from her recollection of the events."

Oh, man. I can't wait to see you're Angle 3 comment. This is so awesome. :]