All Comments on 'Doing a Favor Gets Me in Trouble'

Who the heck is Gary?

OK but ... Gary, Gary? WTF is Gary?

What happened to the names?????

Great story - you changed Jim to Gary on page 2 -

It seems you switched names from Jim to Gary and it confused me for a second.

Thanks for a good ending to a very painful situation for Gary. At least the friendship will continue because of his honesty and his friend's respect of him for it.

Sloppy with the names. Also please share another chapter - we have to know where this goes. Troy seems to be handling this very well but what does that mean? Is he just cool with a gay best friend that’s in love with him or does he feel some romantic feelings for Jim (Gary?!)? I mean Troy did get hard too so…

I liked it until "Jim" was suddenly "Gary." Not cool.

I’m so sorry for the screw up. Not an excuse but I was working on three stories at the same time. Never again. I hate when that happens in stories I’m reading. I’ll do better. If there were a way I’d edit it but I can’t find a way to do that.

Either way, nice read man. Keep it going...

"Irregardless"?

Needs editing and the names switching mid story was a big turn off. Sorry

It made me rember my crush on my best friend at school. I can relate to this story completely. As others have said, I got a bit confused with the name change but it didn't detract too much from my enjoyment. By the way, my best friend was my best man at my wedding. He still gives me a frisson even though we are both in our early 70s.

Is it Jim or Gary? The name switch was a huge turn off and you are a moron for not proofreading your story 😕

Pull the damn thing down, fix it and repost 🥺

Good story, but poorly constructed and filled with non-words (irregardless not even a word), main character's name changed, etc. Needs a proofread. But I loved the story and want more. If the author tries it could be awesome

What’s up with the name change?!? Totally lost focus reading.. at first I thought we were giving the dicks a name then the dicks started talking.. consistency would make the story

I was enjoying this story ... Even with the typos.... You need to edit. However, Changing names mid story really ruined it for me. You had such a good start.

That was actually a good read. I remember being very attracted to a few guys at high school, but never did anything about it at the time. I can only imagine what would have happened if I'd been in the same position as Jim; like most teenage lads, I got a boner with the slightest inspiration.

Please don't leave it there; we need to know how this developed. After all, Troy also got hard!

@ Michrick1: don't see any examples of your writing on your profile. Maybe go back to your glass house if you're not here to support and/or constructively critique? You're doing fine nudedude03. I certainly see improvement. Keep up the good, hard work! Your fan, Dan