All Comments on 'Doing Dina Favors'

by tlc143

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You need to do more drafts

Poor grammar, lazy word choices, and careless punctuation. You need to do more than one draft of a story and you need to use an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

With a friend like this fat hoe who needs enemies! Wish the wife would find out and he can go fuck rolly-polly all he wants.

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