All Comments on 'Doing It for Donna'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hot

A great story..

rafman188rafman188about 13 years ago
Another great story.

The Master story-teller produces another masterpiece!

Mriceman1964Mriceman1964about 13 years ago
Great

Hope you will continue with another chapter.Thanks

PeperePepereabout 13 years ago
Add another chapter

Great story line that can't end here

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 13 years ago
A great fantasy

Who wouldn't want to be in this guys situation, it's almost like a wet dream.

A very erotic and exciting story along with being well written.

Thanks for the good read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Personally, I don't see...

...why everyone seems to be raving about this story. The characters were two-dimensional, the sex-scenes quite average and lack-luster, and the premise has been hashed and re-hashed so many times that it's pathetic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Names

It seems you switch up the names sometimes throughout the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Loved it! :). Thanks for writing!

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago
Nope

a cheating bitch in a toy story.

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