by JukeboxEMCSA
This story is simply amazing. In fact, this not a "story" … it is a transformative experience. I have not felt this much comfort and personal intimacy in a long time. I feel like I can breathe freely.
I needed this.
Thank you so much.
The choice of narrative was striking. Nice, slow build up. Quick release at end. No typos..pet peeve of mine, sentence structure impeccable. Fast enjoyable read. Hope I can find more by this author. Keep up the inspired work!!!
I wish all of your submissions had audio attached. I don't have enough hands without it :/
That was just... Oh my god... I am.... Can I be your dolly ......please....
Definitely want to hear this, in addition to reading, this would be a great script, an I bet you have many more in you.
I love it. You are one talented writer (I wish I had your skill) and I So agree, it could definitely use an audio accompaniment. Just Love it.