All Comments on 'Dollars and Sins Ch. 02'

Better and better... I am REALLY enjoying this. You definitely have some mad writing skills. Loved the description of her mind having a "glitter explosion" and thn reassembling herself bit by bit. Perfectly captured her rapture. Cannot waitto see how he spends the remaining dollars. Well done! 5 Stars.

What a great story line, a very good idea, well written. The story is developing slowly which is good for me, the only criticism for me is that I would love it if each chapter was that bit longer.

keep on writing!

It rare that a story plot does not include elements of others but your stands out as one of those. Excellent please continue.

Seems you have put more effort into this chapter. It really shows. Please keep it up.

why can't this story be 10 pages long. just give us the full story ? i'm sure if you did this would be 4.5+ story. 10 pages would give it a better climax at the end instead of the cheap little thrills in these little 2 page windup's. 3/5

Started interesting , but it ended up not being as good as it seemed it was going

Love how the son is slowing seducing his mother with satanic dollar bills lol! Can't wait to see the entire story! Please don't take too long!

The best solution for "cheap little thrills in these little 2 page windup's" (if the story is good) is to wait until the story is complete and only then read it.

There is no panic about having to read a story when it is posted.

There is no shortage of great "complete" stories here on the Lit !

Short chapters? yes or no? sometimes shorter chapters are better because if it were more than five pages I long with others would not read it and miss out on a good story.

This story is going along wonderfully and I'm enjoying it a great deal. Good job!