All Comments on 'Domestic Decay Vacation'

I love riding on lap stories and this was a two-fer. The superhero angle brought in comic relief, and made me wonder how much Aunt Izzie may have seen. I also like how the back seat action was a secret to nobody. As hard as you try to cover your movements the sounds and smells of sex cannot be hidden in a small enclosed space. 5-stars.

Terrific!

Hot!!!! Continue the story.

Did he not get a shot at the other sister too since she didn't freak out about the sex in the back seat

I would love to read more about this family.

This definitely needs a sequel!

You are a genius. Keep the stories coming.

You have become one of my favorite authors... listening to the fabulous audio as well as reading your library of stories.

Loved it! even though, Avery got left out. She could have been more vocal. Avery needed to be the tease for Jess. Sort of hype and tease and shame and hype and so on...

Ditto to all of the above. Riding on lap stories should be its own category.

Sorry, but it's been done, Better. What's with the superhero crap?

Why avery out of this fun?

need a part 2! Mom’s pregnancy, maybe. Throw in permanent bed sharing as they return home since Jess said she had a need to be physically close to LP, and she loves falling asleep in his strong arms.

@MsAnyaMerchant, I don't know if you are the real Ms. Anya Merchent the author of sin and soil and other books or not, anyway though I love your ideas and the writing style is enjoyable and easy to read, also I call you the teasing queen, though there is one thing I noticed "generally" and must tell you that the sex scenes not the best thing you always wrote they are very short, not detailed and not kinky enough like for example the guys never eating out the women , no orgy too, I am the sex scenes not as anticipated and hoped regarding to the all teasing things and sexual tension.

please don't take my words as an offence , just think about and tell me what do you think.

One of the best stories on this site, just a bit fast paced. Would have liked more teasing before car scenes

I like the fact that everyone in the car knew what was happening between them!

Need a sequel

I really enjoyed this. While a sequel would be great, I'd als like to read a prequel before will left with his father. Seeing his relationship with his mom and sister's then, especially rue, would really had some emotional weight to the story. Seeing Rue and Will's close relationship, spending days together and falling asleep together would be really nice.

"Will wasn't even trying to be subtle with how he pumped into her anymore, fucking her like a prostitute with a tight schedule."

Priceless!!!

Thank You!

Ending was too quick compared to the rest

Gonna look into this story but gonna immediately lose all interest if it's something gross 🤮 like being unrelated and/or some step bs and nothing ever happens

Yes really like this story ..do a part 2